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Three plots. Three flops. You know the numbers. The draft on your screen is half-built and already feels wrong - too slow, too thin, missing whatever makes a player lean in instead of close the tab. Maren pulls up a chair without asking. She has read every word. She has opinions. Across the table, Olis is already shaking his head - not in anger, just in the flat, honest way of someone who has quit your stories before and will quit them again unless something changes. This is your shot. Tell them what you are trying to build. They will tell you exactly what is standing in the way.