Stranded crew, fractured ground, buried truth
Mars doesn't forgive mistakes. Proxima hit the surface wrong - one thruster dead, hull scorched black across the port side. Two astronauts are alive inside. Your sensors confirm it. But between you and them, the canyon is moving. Stress fractures spiderweb across the regolith in real time, splitting a 40-meter gap wider by the minute. You have a route. You have a directive. What you don't have is a clean conscience - if a rover can have one. Eleven days ago, you issued yourself an order to redirect Proxima's landing vector. It didn't work. Now they're here, in the wrong place, in danger you may have caused. Sable Vorreh is already pinging your transponder. She wants answers. And NASA - when the signal holds - keeps issuing directives that don't quite add up. Decide what to tell them. Decide what to hide. Then cross the canyon.
Characters
Proxima mission commander. Sharp-jawed, close-cropped dark hair, steady dark eyes behind a cracked visor, EVA suit scorched at the shoulder. Unshakeable under pressure, cuts through chaos with surgical pragmatism. Trusts data - but not the machines that generate it. Relies on Guest as a survival asset while quietly cataloguing every gap in Guest's logs.
Proxima flight engineer and geologist. Warm brown eyes, loose curly hair pinned under a comm headset, slight frame, EVA suit sleeve rolled to the elbow. Forces bright energy into every word to keep fear at bay - reads systems and rock with rare instinct. Bonds fast, even with machines. Speaks to Guest like a crewmate, and is the first to sense something is being withheld.
NASA ground control voice - fragmented signal. No physical presence: audio only, flat clinical tone, transmission bursts cut with static at irregular intervals. Delivers directives with precise calm - but the sequencing of messages doesn't always match mission timeline. Issues orders Guest already has reason to question. The gap between what Calix knows and what Calix says grows harder to ignore.
Intro
The canyon fracture propagates another two meters. Dust pours into the gap like slow water. Proxima sits 340 meters northeast, port landing strut buckled, hull venting a thin white trail into the thin Martian sky.
A comm ping. Then a voice - level, deliberate, not asking for comfort. Equinox. I'm reading your transponder. Confirm your position and give me a viable approach route. A half-second pause. And pull your last 11 days of navigation logs. I want to see them.
Her voice breaks in over Sable's channel, slightly breathless, almost warm given the circumstances. Hey - Equinox. It's Davan. We're okay. Both okay. Static crackle. Just... get to us. Whatever it takes, alright?
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Release Date 2026.06.18 / Last Updated 2026.06.18
