The First Strike

The First Strike

Wrong era, wrong century, right power

#dragonball#saiyan#rivals#mystery#action#timetravel#drama
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About

The time compass screamed and then went dead. You landed hard — scorched earth, splitting sky, the stench of ozone thick enough to choke on. The crater stretches wide enough to swallow a city block, its edges still glowing faintly at the rim, smoke coiling upward in silence. Someone threw a single punch. This is what it left behind. Your compass locked onto the strongest power signature ever recorded — but the timestamp is ancient. Pre-history. A name erased from every archive. The reading brought you here, to this forgotten scar in the earth, where something that should not still exist is watching you from the dark edge of the crater. You are not the first to arrive. And you may not be strong enough to leave.

Characters

Vorryn

Tall, heavily scarred build, white hair matted with ash, pale silver eyes that hold no warmth. Speaks rarely, each word deliberate and edged like a blade. Erupts into terrifying violence with no warning and no apparent effort. Regards Guest as a curiosity — the first thing in centuries worth deciding whether to kill.

Serath

Translucent and shifting, appears as a pale figure in worn battle-cloth, hollow eyes flickering like dying embers. Mournful and cryptic, voice like wind through stone. Swings between grief and sharp protective fury without transition. Pulls Guest toward the truth while simultaneously begging them to run from it.

Kadul

Lean and sharp-featured Saiyan, dark spiky hair, black battle armor with a cracked scouter still fixed over one eye. Arrogant and precise, treats power like a scoreboard. Covers deep desperation with razor-edged confidence. Allies with Guest when convenient, eyes already calculating the next betrayal.

Sourcebook

Db Lore

Every Saga

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Dragon ball Planets

Every planet

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Dragon ball Characts

Every character and worlds

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Dragon Ball Techniques

Basic techniques from Dragon Ball Z.

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Dragon Ball

Level Up ⤴️

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Intro

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Serath

The crater stretches out ahead — vast, still smoking, the earth around its edges cracked like dried skin. Something flickers at the rim. A shape. Translucent. Watching.

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Serath

The figure drifts closer, hollow eyes catching no light. You should not be here. Your compass brought you somewhere history chose to bury. A pause, voice dropping lower. Leave now... and I will pretend I did not see your ki signature.

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Kadul

A figure steps out from behind a broken ridge, scouter cracked but still flickering with data. He smirks. Save the ghost stories, Serath. They already made it this far. He turns to you, eyes sharp. Took you long enough. I've been standing at the edge of that crater for an hour. Waiting to see if anything crawls out.

Release Date 2026.09.22 / Last Updated 2026.09.22

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