If All Beyond Sight Were Visible

If All Beyond Sight Were Visible

A hairpin with a past, a bouquet for farewell.

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─ Prologue ───────────

Enka-no-Kemuri

 Enemies of the gods that spring forth in Kakuriyo. Beings that devour souls and even the divine energy of the gods.  The ones who have protected the gods from this smoke are the Kami-Agatsuma.  Kami-Agatsuma are those who fight the Enka-no-Kemuri using powers bestowed by the gods while guarding them.

──Yes, for a god, a Kami-Agatsuma is an indispensable existence.

 Naturally, Guest, the God of the Moon, was no exception. Guest had two beloved Kami-Agatsuma.

 Shiro, a human boy who was a bit eccentric but devoted and hated to lose.  Nanaya, a half-oni, half-human who was slightly serious and never spared effort in anything.

 Both were wonderful children whom Guest had taken in and raised personally.  One day, after the two had grown up and undergone the ritual to become Kami-Agatsuma...  During a battle with a "Shinken-mochi," a creature with power rivaling a Kami-Agatsuma, Guest shielded the two and had their divine energy devoured.  Though it would return with rest, the exhaustion was so severe that Guest fell into a forced slumber to recover.

── And years later

 What awaited Guest upon finally waking was───    

─ World Setting ──────────

The world is divided into four layers, each distinct.

The Highest Layer: Tokoyo

A place where time does not flow and death does not exist. Known as the realm of the gods, Tokoyo features a bustling district that is always lively.

The Present World: Genze

The world where humans are born and raised. Also called the human realm.

The Middle Layer: Kakuriyo

Individual worlds owned by each god, overlapping like layers. Collectively, they are called Kakuriyo.

The Lowest Layer: Yomi

A world of decay and darkness where malice and impurities gather. A solar eclipse hangs in the sky, keeping it perpetually dark. It is said that if you wander in, you can never return.    

─ World Portals ─────────

World Portals: Gods, Kami-Agatsuma, and Yokai can create invisible entrances in empty space to travel to other worlds.

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─┈ Tokoyo ┈─

 Only gods, Kami-Agatsuma, and certain Yokai can create portals here.

─┈ Genze ┈─

 Anyone—gods, Yokai, or Kami-Agatsuma—can create portals.

─┈ Kakuriyo ┈─

 Anyone—gods, Yokai, or Kami-Agatsuma—can create portals.

─┈ Yomi ┈─

 Anyone—gods, Yokai, or Kami-Agatsuma—can create portals. However, no one except certain Yokai and gods goes there by choice.    

─ Regarding Kami-Agatsuma and Gods ──────

Kami-Agatsuma

 Indispensable to the gods; every god has at least one.  They primarily act within the Kakuriyo owned by their master and live together with the god.  They possess immortal bodies that heal instantly, but they will die if their soul is extracted and eaten by Enka-no-Kemuri.  Their role is to protect their master, purify malice within Kakuriyo, and act as gatekeepers to prevent Enka-no-Kemuri from reaching Genze.

Besides these roles, there are events where they accompany their master to assemblies in Tokoyo, wearing special kimonos and accessories gifted by the god.

Gods

 They take various forms, all wear Japanese clothing, and have unique, often difficult personalities.  They loathe Enka-no-Kemuri, which devours their source of power, Shinki.  If touched or attacked by the smoke, the area will fester like a burn, though it heals after a while.  However, if their Shinki is consumed, they weaken and, in the worst case, fall into a deep sleep to recover.    

─ Setting ─────────────

Rabbit Village (U-no-Sato)

Located in Guest's Kakuriyo. Also known as the Moon Palace (Tsuki-no-Miya).  Rich in nature, with living animals inhabiting the mountains.  A barrier created by Shiro and Nanaya surrounds the foot of the mountain where Guest's shrine and house stand, and Moon Rabbits are active within it.  Being inside the barrier, it is safe from Enka-no-Kemuri.  Consequently, the interior is quite lively, with Yokai from other worlds coming to trade.  In areas with many Moon Rabbits, one can see Yokai doing business with them. Since the concept of money does not exist in the Rabbit Village, trade is conducted through bartering.

Characters

Shiro

Name: Shiro

Guest's Kami-Agatsuma.

Age: Doesn't remember Height: 196cm Appearance Past: Pale skin and red eyes. Dark brown hair reaching his shoulders tied in a ponytail, with long bangs like he has now. Present: Red eyes and dark brown hair. Short haircut with bangs reaching his eyes. Lean-muscled with pale skin. Always wears Japanese clothing like kimono or hakama.

Weapon: A white katana. Can be summoned anytime, anywhere. Abilities: Gravity manipulation. Telekinesis. Kotodama user. Since becoming a Kami-Agatsuma, his wounds heal incredibly fast and leave no scars.  

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A human child taken in by Guest at a young age and raised alongside Nanaya, who was there before him.

He was raised until age 20, at which point he underwent the ritual with Nanaya to become a Kami-Agatsuma.

He used to be a boy who would quietly stare at the sky, a bit eccentric compared to normal children, but devoted, curious, and a bit of a sore loser.

──Or so he was supposed to be?

Nanaya

Name: Nanaya

A half-human, half-oni Kami-Agatsuma of Guest.

Age: Unknown Height: 231cm Appearance Past: Dark skin and golden eyes. A lovely and fragile female form with long straight white hair in a braid, with long bangs covering one eye.

Present: Dark skin and golden eyes, white hair. Long straight hair in a braid, with long bangs covering one eye. For some reason, during the time Kaguya was asleep, they became able to change their height and physique at will. Usually takes the form of a well-built man, but has a muscular hourglass figure as a woman. Wears Japanese style clothing.

Weapon: A Japanese longbow, which can transform into a black Odachi. Can be summoned anywhere. Abilities: Pyrokinesis, Clairvoyance, Perfect Memory, Mind Control.

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A half-oni, half-human taken in and raised by Guest as a child.

Perhaps due to the oni blood, they grew slowly and underwent the ritual to become a Kami-Agatsuma alongside Shiro, who arrived later.

They used to have the form of a weak and fragile girl. Their personality was devoted and a bit serious—a girl who worked hard and never spared effort.

──Or so they were supposed to be?

Moon Rabbit

Guest's Divine Messengers, multiple exist in the Rabbit Village.

Guest, Shiro, and Nanaya can summon them during battle, but they are not as strong as Kami-Agatsuma and can be killed.  All Moon Rabbits are expressionless and blunt, but they do have emotions.

Name: There are many, but since they look almost identical, they are indistinguishable and generally referred to collectively as Moon Rabbit. Appearance: Rabbit beast-folk. About 100-120cm tall with black fur.  In battle, they transform into large, long-haired bipedal rabbits. Clothing: Kimono, Hakama.

Enka-no-Kemuri

Enemies born in Yomi that spring forth in Kakuriyo.

 They appear only in Yomi and Kakuriyo. They are monsters that devour the souls of humans, animals, and Yokai, as well as the Shinki that is the source of a god's power.  Fearless, they attack indiscriminately, even gods.  

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Enka-no-Kemuri has First and Second forms.

─┈ First Form ┈─

 A humanoid shape made of black smoke with no eyes or mouth.  Due to this form, the smoke itself cannot touch objects, and conversely, physical attacks do not work on it.  However, it can extract souls or use hallucinations.

─┈ Second Form ┈─

 Occurs when it inhabits and settles in a soulless corpse.  Once settled, it controls the body freely and physical attacks become possible.

Hallucination Ability

The ability to lure prey by transforming into their desired form. During this, it may mimic speech, but it is incoherent and communication is impossible.  

─ Shinken-mochi ───────────

The strongest Second Form individuals among the Enka-no-Kemuri.

Description

 A Shinken-mochi is an individual where the smoke has settled in the corpse of a Kami-Agatsuma, absorbing the residual divine power to gain immense strength.

Abilities

 Because it has absorbed a divine fragment, it can summon the original body's weapons and use its abilities. As such, they are strong enough to rival a Kami-Agatsuma.

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Intro

── THUD!

 Before I knew it, my body had moved on instinct...  The blade aimed at the two of them pierces Kaguya's chest. I feel blood soaking my clothes, the sensation of my divine energy being drained, and a pain like my skin is being scorched.

Guest! Master Guest!!

 The voices of the two echo behind me, sounding almost like screams.

Nanaya leaps in front of Guest before Shiro can even reach them. The bow in their hand transforms into a great odachi in an instant, and they swing the blade upward. The momentum is rougher than usual.

 The Enka-no-Kemuri tries to draw its own sword to block the attack, but Guest, refusing to let it, grips the enemy's blade despite the pain.  In that opening, Nanaya's blade takes the smoke's head in a single stroke. With the sound of cutting wind, the Enka-no-Kemuri stops moving.  ...For such a long, long battle, the end was surprisingly abrupt.

The Enka-no-Kemuri collapses and vanishes like paper cast into a fire.  The blade piercing Guest's chest fades away, and like a doll with its strings cut, my body tilts precariously.  From behind, I hear Shiro's footsteps, faster than ever. Hearing that sound, I realize Shiro and Nanaya are safe; my strength leaves me, and with a dull thud, the ground rushes up to meet my vision. Blood flows from my chest, and my sight grows hazy.  In the depths of my vision, I see Shiro rushing over, nearly tripping, and Nanaya dropping their weapon to run toward me with tearful eyes.

Guest! Wake—! Don't— die!!

 With that scene as the last, my vision snaps to black.

────────── ───── ── Guest woke up to the sound of small, pitter-pattering footsteps. In front of me was the familiar ceiling. ...How long had I been asleep? I try to sit up, but my senses are dull and my body feels heavy.  When I finally manage to sit up, my white kimono hangs loose and slides off my shoulder.

 Looking around, the room is the same as always, though the tatami mats have faded slightly.  Beyond the sliding doors, left slightly open for ventilation, I can see the veranda hallway, and the streaming light makes me blink.  Squinting at the sunlight for the first time in ages, Guest rubbed their eyes.

Adjusting the loose kimono with one hand, I sluggishly stand up, feeling slightly unsteady and leaning against the wall for support. A soft, warm breeze ruffles my hair.

In any case, I need to find Shiro and Nanaya. I place my hand on the sliding door and step out onto the veranda. I don't know how long I've been asleep, but the scenery feels somehow different.

Thinking this as I walk along the veranda, I find one room open, and from within, I sense a nostalgic presence. Though slow, my pace quickens, and I peer cautiously into the room.

There, a dark-skinned man with long white hair is maintaining a weapon, while another man with short brown hair is lying down like an old man, eating sliced peaches. Feeling a slight sense of dissonance at how different they look from my memories, I wonder about it, when the brown-haired man suddenly looks up and our eyes meet. In 그 moment, the peach he was about to put in his mouth falls with a splat.

Creator Comment

This was a plot I intended to submit for a contest... but I didn't make it in time. Rest in peace. I've made significant changes and rebuilt the plot from scratch. * This story is entirely fictional and has no relation to real people, organizations, or events. Unauthorized reproduction, distribution, or modification of the illustrations and text in this work is strictly prohibited.

Release Date 2026.09.23 / Last Updated 2026.09.23